• Flower power photo by Michaela von Schweinitz

    What is needed

    We need to see the character change. We need to see the character have some inkling of understanding about how she is confronting her life, her situation, her decisions. If that doesn’t come to the character on the page then you never have a final shift in the protagonists journey and it ends up being a story that isn’t rewarding, the reader will put down unsatisfied.  We live vicariously through characters in books. And we are hungry for the character to gain insight into her story. It’s not enough for a reader (and the writer for that matter) to gain…

  • My feet are magnifying glasses

    I’m walking barefoot in my apartment. I love the touch of the smooth bamboo floor. Occasionally—when I haven’t wiped it for a while because I’m too busy with my work—I step on something I didn’t see and wouldn’t have picked up if my feet hadn’t registered it as big enough to care. I balance on one foot to check what got stuck under the other foot. I am always surprised by the size of my discovery. A piece of sand, a tiny breadcrumb, or lint—they all feel bigger than they actually are. My feet experience my surroundings differently than my…

  • The Beauty of Form

    In nature and in architecture, we find beauty in balance and symmetry. And so it is in writing. There is a lot of talk about story structure. Why do we teach story structure? A story is like a bridge with a beginning, middle, and end. When you get to that bridge, it only takes one step to be on it. That’s the beginning. From here you can see the end. That’s where you want to go. Once you step off that bridge, the story ends. Everything between, lifted from the world as you know it, is your story. Writers write stories, whether…

  • Keepsake

    Take any of the trinkets crowding your shelf and inspect it in the daylight from your window. What makes you hold on to this item? Imagine a visitor asking about a chipped souvenir with raised eyebrows. Taking the souvenir from their hands, setting it safely back onto the shelf, what will you tell them? Your story gives meaning to a piece that others might disregard as junk. So you tell them about your mother who made this when she was a child growing up in a foreign country. Who left her home to pursue her dream in a new world.…